I enjoyed this very much and the end took me off into the sunset with Jim and Blair. Roadtrip! One of my fave story kinks. Um, if you wrote a sequel I would be so right there!
The shamanism was fascinating and I particularly liked how Blair, who theoretically knows more about this than Jim, is doing the Westernized version of scheduling this quest at his convenience and it takes Jim, who worked with Incacha, to understand and insist on doing it the right way. True equals here.
BTW, I spotted a beta comment still in the text. [888 - Cindy] in the 'Let's buy hogs' scene.
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Date: 2009-09-30 10:53 pm (UTC)The shamanism was fascinating and I particularly liked how Blair, who theoretically knows more about this than Jim, is doing the Westernized version of scheduling this quest at his convenience and it takes Jim, who worked with Incacha, to understand and insist on doing it the right way. True equals here.
BTW, I spotted a beta comment still in the text. [888 - Cindy] in the 'Let's buy hogs' scene.